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Post by eobversion1 » Mon Jan 09, 2017 3:40 pm

*high fives Andy*
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Post by Little Jimmy » Mon Jan 09, 2017 3:49 pm

Understandable mistake I might have avoided by paying more attention, my bad. With that said, my balls still do need a good sucking.
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Post by eobversion1 » Sun Jan 15, 2017 3:32 pm

Hideo was pretty right Andy.
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Post by AndyF1069 » Sun Jan 15, 2017 3:37 pm

I was thinking the same thing when I saw your post. I need to make it a priority to go watch the movie.
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Re: The Ask Evan A Question Thread

Post by GooberBM » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:40 pm

So during my Fall/Winter sabbatical I made time to rewatch Me and Earl and the Dying Girl.

Why, man? Just why?

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Re: The Ask Evan A Question Thread

Post by eobversion1 » Tue Jan 24, 2017 4:22 pm

I know man, I freaking know. I feel you. Also, I finished your short story, my memory of it is a little hazy but I definitely think it's a great second draft waiting to happen.
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Post by GooberBM » Tue Jan 24, 2017 4:42 pm

Wait...what?
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Post by eobversion1 » Tue Jan 24, 2017 4:43 pm

Laurel and Max?
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Post by GooberBM » Tue Jan 24, 2017 5:08 pm

No no, the praise. Elaborations are necessary. Besides, that's still an unfinished first draft. Though I could second draft the stuff that's in existence, sure
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Post by eobversion1 » Tue Jan 24, 2017 5:20 pm

I mean nothing in particular that I haven't mentioned before, streamline the story a bit better, maybe cut some of the Laurel and Max stuff and try to make the stuff that works a bit better which is perhaps why my memory is a bit hazy because it seemed to blend together. Perhaps flesh out some supporting characters like parents a bit more too. Other than that it depends on if you're writing for you or for an audience as to what changes you should make.
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Re: The Ask Evan A Question Thread

Post by eobversion1 » Wed Jul 05, 2017 3:18 pm

Yes
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Re: The Ask Evan A Question Thread

Post by eobversion1 » Sun Jul 16, 2017 4:07 pm

I will fucking end you Arepighrope.
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